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My third English Essay "the change of my life"

Before the Corona virus, I went everywhere, include canada, Dubai and Italy also there is more many places. Also, we can not eat the meal in the restaurant. I love to eat the meal but I want to eat outside too. I can not also eat Tteokbokki(korean spicy rice cake)with my friends. We can not go to the amusement park. I want to go there with my family. After the Corona Virus , I hope we can go to the amusement park, restaurant and also swimming pool. I really miss that. I want to go swimming pool. The Corona virus is really bad. The corona virus ruin everything and also peoples. I think the earth is very sick because of the corona virus. And how can we figure out the issue of corona virus. First we need to do the social distancing and infectious disease especially schools. Maybe next year i hope we can stop the corona virus.

Before the Coronavirus, I went everywhere, including Canada, Dubai and Italy and a lot more places. And now, we cannot eat the meal in the restaurant. I love to eat the meal and I want to eat outside too. I cannot also eat Tteokbokki (korean spicy rice cake) with my friends. We cannot go to the amusement park. I want to go there with my family. After the Coronavirus , I hope that we can go to the amusement park, restaurant and also swimming pool. I really miss that. I want to go to the swimming pool. The Coronavirus is really bad. The Coronavirus ruined everything. I think the earth is very sick because of the Coronavirus. So,how can we solve the issue of Corona virus? First, we need to do the social distancing and cure infectious diseases, especially disinfecting all of the schools. Maybe next year I hope we can stop the Coronavirus.


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