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MAY 18 -(2)

Due to this repress, there were few deads and among them, there was a hearing-impaired person. Soldiers were hit him due to they thought he was acting. On May 19, the morning sun raised. Still, many people came out to protest. But the difference is most of the protesters were citizens. As news of the martial law army's violence, the previous day spread to citizens, angry citizens joined the protest. As police and soldiers tried to subdue by firing tear gas, people joined forces to throw stones and Molotov cocktails.

Then the airborne forces launched a crackdown, just as they did the day before, or more brutally. The soldiers were grouped with two or three, and chasing them until they caught. They swung clubs and bayonets at the person caught and made them bloody, and it was hard to take off clothes and leave only his underwear behind. As the crackdown continued, the martial law army gradually went too far and gave shouts to those arrested in the middle of the street or attacked inns to catch not only employees but also guests. They said people should closed doors and curtains to nearby buildings for fear that their actions would be noticeable. "If you look down, I'll shoot you." Also, if there were people watching or criticizing them, they chased and used violence even if they were inside the building. So even the police officer said, "Please go home. "If you get caught by airborne forces, you'll all die," he said.

Due to this repress, there were few dead people and among them was a hearing-impaired person. Soldiers hit him thinking he was just acting. On May 19th, the morning sun had risen. Still, many people came out to protest. But the difference is most of the protesters were citizens. As news about the martial law army's violence, the previous day spread to citizens, angry citizens joined the protest. As police and soldiers tried to subdue by firing tear gas, people joined forces to throw stones and Molotov cocktails.

Then the airborne forces launched a crackdown, just as they did the day before, or more brutally. The soldiers were grouped with two or three, and chasing them until they caught. They swung clubs and bayonets at the person caught and made them bloody, and it was hard to take off clothes and leave only his underwear behind. As the crackdown continued, the martial law army gradually went too far and gave shouts to those arrested in the middle of the street or attacked inns to catch not only employees but also guests. They said people should closed doors and curtains to nearby buildings for fear that their actions would be noticeable. "If you look down, I'll shoot you." Also, if there were people watching or criticizing them, they chased and used violence even if they were inside the building. So even the police officer said, "Please go home. "If you get caught by airborne forces, you'll all die," he said.


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