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My uncle

My uncle is almost 74.
He never get married and lived with his parents.
He used to live with his parents when they were alive but after my grandparents passed away, he has to live alone.
He seems so bored.
Thesedays he plants lettuce and send to us.
i really his lettuce because it is organic. And he is very talented to grow plants like my grandmother.
He went through vietnam war and He was a soldier. He said he saw many people died in front of his sight so he had a traumatic experience. It was hard for him to overcome that trauma but I think he try to appreciate his life and keeps moving forward.
He always is thankful for what he has and enjoy his daily life.
I admire him overcoming such a difficulty.
Thesedays i feel so frustrated and tired but I need to be appreciate more and thank to other people who take care of me.
I need to be more humble and do my very best to all things that given to me.

My uncle is almost 74.
He never get married and lived with his parents.
He used to live with his parents when they were alive but after my grandparents passed away, he has to live alone.
He seems so bored.
Thesedays he plants lettuce and send to us.
i really his lettuce because it is organic. And he is very talented to grow plants like my grandmother.
He went through vietnam war and He was a soldier. He said he saw many people died in front of his sight so he had a traumatic experience. It was hard for him to overcome that trauma but I think he try to appreciate his life and keeps moving forward.
He always is thankful for what he has and enjoy his daily life.
I admire him overcoming such a difficulty.
Thesedays i feel so frustrated and tired but I need to be appreciate more and thank to other people who take care of me.
I need to be more humble and do my very best to all things that given to me.

 

CORRECTION:

My uncle is almost 74.
He never gets married and lived with his parents.
He used to live with them when they were alive but after my grandparents passed away, he has to live alone.
He seems so bored.
These days he plants lettuce and send to us.
I really like his lettuce because it is organic and he is very talented in growing plants like my grandmother.
He went through Vietnam war and He was a soldier. He said he saw many people died in front of his sight so he had a traumatic experience. It was hard for him to overcome that trauma but I think he tried to appreciate his life and keeps moving forward.
He is always thankful for what he has and enjoys his daily life.
I admire him overcoming such difficulty.
These days I feel so frustrated and tired but I need to be appreciated more and thank other people who take care of me.
I need to be more humble and do my very best to all things that are given to me.


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