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Hello? I’m Lee Nawon in first grade.

Today I’m going to talk about the changes of my lifestyles caused by Corona.

It’s been more than 1year since Corona started and I had a lot of changes in my life which was very difficult.

Like everyone we can’t get close to each other, and can’t emphathize each other’s facial expressions because we are having masks on our face.

Spending a year like that I became middle school student from elementry school student.

Due to a different graduation ceremony that I didn’t wanted, I got sensitive and irritable to someone I don’t know.

However when I felt that the thoughts were not helpful to me I realized that how much the time is precious.

Because for some, my vain day may be a desperate time.

So I thought, “Let’s find my pleasure.” and organized it, I had to summarize it because it was more than I thought.


3. Making foods.

I felt pleasure of making my family some food and also because I felt I had something I could do for my family.

when I leave the front door, I have to put one a mask and sometimes I get out of breath, but I think everyone has to put effort desperately to return to the old life.

The relationships with true friends won’t get worse because of Corona.

Like the sentence “This will also pass.”, I think that soon the time will come when all these things will become memories.

Hope everyone spend their time wisely and pelase share your ideas of fun life with your friends.

Thank you for listening.

3. Making food
I felt the pleasure of making food for my family and also I felt like this is something I could do for them.

When I leave the front door, I have to put  a mask. Sometimes, I felt like I am out of breath, but everyone has to put it on if I want to return to our old life.


The relationship with true friends won’t get worse because of Corona Virus. Just like the saying, “This will also pass.” I think that soon, time will come when all these things will become memories.

Hope everyone spend their time wisely. Please share your ideas of how you have fun with your friends.

Thank you for listening.


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