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Hello? I’m Lee Nawon in first grade.

Today I’m going to talk about the changes of my lifestyles caused by Corona.

It’s been more than 1year since Corona started and I had a lot of changes in my life which was very difficult.

Like everyone we can’t get close to each other, and can’t emphathize each other’s facial expressions because we are having masks on our face.

Spending a year like that I became middle school student from elementry school student.

Due to a different graduation ceremony that I didn’t wanted, I got sensitive and irritable to someone I don’t know.

However when I felt that the thoughts were not helpful to me I realized that how much the time is precious.

Because for some, my vain day may be a desperate time.

So I thought, “Let’s find my pleasure.” and organized it, I had to summarize it because it was more than I thought.

1. Read the book I wanted to read

There was a book that I usually wanted to read, but it wasn’t easy to read until the end due to the academy and school, but these days I don’t go to academy a lot, and these days I read it in 2-3 days.

2. Walking in Jagwnacheun with my family

I think it is the privilege of Jeonuggwan. Walking in Jagwnagcheun can make more conversations with my family and exercise too.

Hello! I’m Lee Nawon. I'm a first grade middle school student. 


Today I’m going to talk about the changes of my lifestyle that was caused by Corona Virus.
It’s been more than a year now since Corona virus started, and a lot of changes happened in my life, which was very difficult for me.


Like everyone, we can’t get close to each other. I can’t identify other people's facial expressions because we have our mask on our face.


Spending a year like that, I became middle school student. And because of this pandemic, I had a different graduation ceremony that I didn’t wanted. I got sensitive and irritable to someone I don’t know.

However, when I feel that the thoughts were not helpful for me, I will then realize how much the time is so precious.


For some, my vain day may be a desperate time.

So I thought of these things, “Let’s find my pleasure and organize it. I had to summarize it because it was more than I thought.


1. Read the book I wanted to read. There was a book that I usually wanted to read, but it wasn’t easy to finish because I have to go to academy and school. But these days, I don’t go to academy frequently so, I can read for 2-3 days.


2. Walking in Jagwnacheun with my family.
I think it is a privilege to walk in Jeonuggwan. Walking in this place can make me have a conversation with my family and I can exercise at the same time. 


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