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I’ve never been to travel alone. I go to travel with friends or family always. Whenever I went to somewhere alone , I visited to my friends house or met friends at destination. I afraid that sleep outside alone. I think I can enjoy one day trip alone. But I don’t have confident to sleep hotel alone. Nowadays I often saw that there are a lot of people travel alone and take photos alone with tripod for camera. I love to take photos. If I go to travel alone, I think it’s not easy to take photos alone. I thought someone who took photos with tripod alone are pity. And I worried that others would look at me pity. But I’ve changed my mind. The world has changed. I don’t want to wait to find travel mate. These days it’s not easy to find travel mate as me. Now I started to plan travel alone. Korea has a very beautiful route called Route 7. We can see east coast along to Route 7. I plan to travel along to Route 7. I will visit some beautiful cities along to Route 7. And I will visit two friends house among to travel. Actually my courage is still not enough. When I plan to travel, sometimes suddenly become lack confidence. But I must be realize my plan to travel alone. I feel that I will grow in many ways after travel alone. And it will be good memories in my life. To travel alone, I need to plan in detail. Maybe I have to book good quality of accommodation for security and check vehicle before the trip. To start something new at first time I need to time to consider. But once I start, I do my best and I must to finish. I’m look forward my trip and afraid alone.

I’ve never traveled alone. I always travel with friends or family. Whenever I go somewhere by myself, I visit to my friend or meet friends at a certain place. I'm afraid to sleep alone. I think I can enjoy one day trip alone but I don’t have the confidence to sleep at the hotel by myself. Nowadays, I often see that there are a lot of people who travel alone and take photos alone using a tripod and a camera. I love to take photos. If I travel alone, I think it’s not easy to take photos alone. I thought someone who took photos with tripod alone look pitiful. I'm also worried that others would look at me with pity. But I’ve changed my mind. The world has changed. I don’t want to wait to find travel buddy. These days it’s not easy to find travel buddy. Now I started to plan travel alone. Korea has a very beautiful route called Route 7. We can see east coast along to Route 7. I plan to travel along to Route 7. I will visit some beautiful cities along to Route 7. And I will visit two friends house among to travel. Actually my courage is still not enough. When I plan to travel, sometimes suddenly become lack confidence. But I must be realize my plan to travel alone. I feel that I will grow in many ways after travel alone. And it will be good memories in my life. To travel alone, I need to plan in detail. Maybe I have to book good quality of accommodation for security and check vehicle before the trip. To start something new at first time I need to time to consider. But once I start, I do my best and I must to finish. I’m look forward my trip and afraid alone.


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