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Hello, my name is Jane. First of all I’m honored to have this interview opportunity. I’m 26 years old and graduated from Sungshin woman university in 2013. My major is clothes and textile and minor is Chinese. I’ve interested in fashion when I was young and I think fashion is major part of any society. Also fashion is important thing that is expressing them. That is why I decide to choice my major and job.
Currently I’m working JCP Korea in fabric team for 1year and half. My company is international buying office. My main duties were development and sourcing fabrics. I felt a strong urge to challenge myself in doing the work. So I need field experience in USA and decide to leave my job in order to my potential for the future.
That’s because I want to go USA, I would like to develop my specialty in fashion filed. And I want to get the experience in USA because Korea fashion trade is connected closely with America fashion industry.

Hello, my name is Jane. First of all I’m honored to have this interview opportunity. I’m 26 years old and graduated from Sungshin woman university in 2013. My major is clothes and textile and minor is Chinese. I’ve interested in fashion when I was young and I think fashion is major part of any society. Also fashion is important thing that is expressing them. That is why I decide to choice my major and job.
Currently I’m working JCP Korea in fabric team for 1year and half. My company is international buying office. My main duties were development and sourcing fabrics. I felt a strong urge to challenge myself in doing the work. So I need field experience in USA and decide to leave my job in order to my potential for the future.
That’s because I want to go USA, I would like to develop my specialty in fashion filed. And I want to get the experience in USA because Korea fashion trade is connected closely with America fashion industry.


Hello, my name is Jane. First of all I’m honored to have this interview opportunity. I’m 26 years old and I graduated from Sungshin Woman University in 2013. My major is Clothes and Textile (and) minor in Chinese. I’ve been interested into fashion when I was young and I think (fashion) it is a major part of any society. Also, fashion is an important thing that (is) helps anyone to express themselves. {That is why I decide to choice my major and job.} = That is why I chose to take up this major and do this job.
Currently I’m working at JCP Korea in fabric team for 1year and a half. My company is an international buying office. My main duty is development and sourcing fabrics. I felt a strong urge to challenge myself in doing the work. So I need another field experience in USA and decide to leave my job in order to improve my potentials for the future.
(That’s because I want to go USA,) I would like to develop my specialty in the fashion field. And I want to get the experience in USA because Korea’s fashion trade is connected closely with America’s fashion industry.


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