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Manny

I love boxing.
i love the people who do boxing.
That's why I fall in love with the boxing champion.
I love boxing because it is about enthusiasm and passion.
Unlike other sports, it doesn't need any gears. and it doesn't need any expensive training.
So most of people who start a boxing was poor but they found a hope from the boxing.
I love the fact we can have a hope.
I really admire many boxing stars.
They grew up poor family and had to do hard work but in the result of hard training, they could be a super star.
I used to complain about my family background.
I thought I was not enough for doing something and I felt shameful about my family.
I wasnt thinking about the possibilities that I have.
I learn a lot things from my boxing star "Mr. Manny"
He doesn't only work for himself but he works for other people.
He helps many people and tries do his best.
I really admire him.

I love boxing and the people who do it. 
i love the people who do boxing.
That's why I fall in love with the boxing champion.
I love boxing because it is about enthusiasm and passion.
Unlike any other sports, it doesn't need any gears and it doesn't need any expensive training.
So, most of the people who start it a boxing (was) is poor but they found a hope in it. (from the boxing)
I love the fact that there's always hope in everything we do. (we can have a hope.)
I really admire many boxing stars (or personalities/celebrities).
They grew up from a poor family and had to (do hard work) work hard and as a result, but in the result of hard training, they become could be popular (a super star.)
I used to complain about my family's background.
I thought I was not enough for doing something and I felt ashamed shameful about my family.
I wasn't thinking about the possibilities that I have.
I learned a lot of things from my boxing idol, star "Mr. Manny". 
He doesn't only work for himself but he works for other people, too.
He helps many people and I really admire him. tries do his best.
 


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