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Hello.Today I am going to tell you about my friends in other countries.I have 3 different country friends.First is Korean friends.I have 18 Korean friends I can't tell you all.The Korean people have respect but some Korean people don't have respect but my friends have.Second American friends are my second friend and they are.And I have 14 american friends they have respect and kindest.Third is Chinese friend.I have 1 Chinese friend her parents are kind and have respect.I am done with my friends interview bye~~

Hello.Today I am going to tell you about my friends in other countries.I have 3 different country friends.First is Korean friends.I have 18 Korean friends I can't tell you all.The Korean people have respect but some Korean people don't have respect but my friends have.Second American friends are my second friend and they are.And I have 14 american friends they have respect and kindest.Third is Chinese friend.I have 1 Chinese friend her parents are kind and have respect.I am done with my friends interview bye~~

 

I have 3 different country friends

Foreign - another place/country

Foreigner - a person from another place/country 

✓  I have 3 foriegn friends

✓  I have 3 friends from different countries

✓  I have 3 friends from foreign friends

✓  I have 3 foreigner friends 

 

But what you are trying to say is, you have friends from 3 different countries , Korea , U.S. and China.

✓  I have friends friends from different countries like America nd China, aside from my friends here in Krea

 

The Korean people have respect but some Korean people don't have respect

Korean - People/or things from Korea

✓ Koreans are very respectful but there are also some Koreans who aren't. 

 

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Hi Yumin!

I hope you had a good weekend

You are very diligent and good at writing more than other kids your age. That is good. Keep it up dear!

 


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