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My grandmother's new house

Today I went to my grandmother's house. My grandmother moved to another apartment last week. But I can't go to my grandmother's house last week. So I was happy when I going to my grandmother's house. The house was not faraway from my house. So we can go to the house as fast as we go to the old my grandmother's house. The new house was small then old house. But I liked the new house. And I was glad to meet my grandmother. We talked about our life these days. And we ate lunch at my grandmother's house. It was delicious! I watched a TV, play with my brother. At the afternoon, my grandfather came my grandmother's house. And, we ate the dinner. It was a meet. My brother ate well. So I was happy.
When we finished the dinner, we went our home. It was very great day!

Today, I went to my grandmother's house. My grandmother moved to another apartment last week, but I can't go to see her new house so I was happy when we visited her. The house was not very far from my house, so we can go to her house as fast as her previous house. Her new house was smaller than her previous house, but I like it. And, I am glad to see my grandmother. We talked about our life these days and we ate lunch together. It was delicious! I watched TV and play with my brother. In the afternoon, my grandfather came and we ate dinner all together. We had meat. My brother ate well, so I was happy. We went back home after dinner. It was a very great day!

 

Thank you for sharing your wonderful time with your family last weekend. ^^
Anyway, please practice to use pronouns and punctuations, comma.

Pronouns will help you minimize repetitive words. ^^

Talk to you tomorrow ^^ Have a happy week ~


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