Hello.Today I am going to tell my best friend interview.Her name is Lydia and she is very kind so I like her and when she is sad I am trying to figure the problems.And she likes to read and play with me and other new friend.Her hobby is to read and play different games.My friend personality is kind and she is A blood.I don't have anything to tell my friend then bye.
Hello.Today I am going to tell my best friend interview.
Try to be diverse and creative, instead of using the same sentences in the beginning of every composition
a good writer is not redundant-> This is about my best friend. ...
Her name is Lydia and she is very kind so I like her and when she is sad I am trying to figure the problems. -> this sentence is too long. A complete sentence has a complete thought. If there is more than one that means it should be another sentence.
->My best friend's name is Lydia. She is very kind. Whenever she is sad I try cheer her up and help her with her problems.
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Thanks for doing your homeworl Good job Yumin! Your sentences are getting better and you will improve more with practice,,, here is a video clip on a short composition about a best friend topic. I hope you watch it and learn from it to make even better[short] essays
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u5lI8KzV5_s
