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Think about a beautiful place that you have visited before.

What does the place look like?
It is surrounded by trees, and the big clean ocean with many white sands. and the beach was very big and large.

What about it is special?
It's beach color is so bright. So it looks like it is white and it's view is amazing magnificent. I can remember it for long time because it was so beautiful. I gasped itself.

How do you get there?
I was walking in the Boracy and there were lots of people's in the street. My parents knew about the White beach so were walking toward there. We wanted to get to the beach. So in a hour, We came to White beach.

What about it is special?

Its beach color is so bright. So it looks like it is white and its view is amazing magnificent. I can remember it for a long time because it was so beautiful. I gasped itself.

CORRECTION: 

The beach was so bright and the view was amazing. I couldn't forget until now the beauty of the place and I gasped itself. 

 

 

How do you get there?

I was walking in the Boracay and there were lots of people in the street. My parents knew about the White beach so were walking toward there. We wanted to get to the beach. So in an hour, We came to White beach.

CORRECTION:

My family and I were walking in Boracay and there's a lot of people in the street. My parents knew everything about the place so I was so excited to see it. After an hour of walking, we reached the amazing beauty of the white sand beach. 


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