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Korean get a lot of stress from social customs. If someone haven’t yet married, social give them pressure to get married. After they married, social will give them pressure to have a baby. After gave birth to a baby, social will give them pressure again to get a second baby. Woman’s marriage age is getting late these days. More and more woman declare celibate. But they still got stress from their family or friends about merry. Social expect that we will buy their own house and car in specific age. Some experts said that if people get that stress , we may express two type of responses. One type is more aggressive. Another type is intimidated who want to live out where nobody known. Experts said that more older is getting more defensive. So try to be aggressive. I want to be freedom from that kind of social expecting. But to be honest, I’m still get stress from that. Actually, I’m not a never-married. I just haven’t yet met my Mr.right. I don’t want to merry just for merry. I want to meet someone who I love rather than be loved. Some of my friends and family blame me to refuse many man’s propose. But I’m not a bad girl. I just haven’t yet met my real love. Sometimes their blame hurt me. If I got merry in early age, maybe I haven’t many opportunity to travel many countries, study new things and make new foreigners friends. I tanks to my life that I have done what I want to and I’ve gone where I want to. I just want to enjoy my life. I constantly try to study new things and I never stop my challenge. My life is mine. I try to don’t care others talking about me.

Korean get a lot of stress from social customs.Most Koreans feel pressured in socializing.  If someone haven’t  somebody hasn't got married yet, social the society give them  too much pressure to get married as soon as possible. After they married their marriage, social the people around them will give them pressure to have a baby. After gave birth to a baby giving birthsocial the people around them will give them too much pressure again to get a second baby. Woman’s marriage age is getting late these days. Most Korean women are getting married late. More and more woman declare celibateA great number of women decides to celibate instead. But they still get stress from their family or friends about merry. getting married. Social The society expect that we will be able to buy their own house and car in at specific age. Some experts said that if people get that stress, we may express two type of responses. One type is more aggressive. Another type is intimidated who want to live out where nobody known.  The first one is have an aggresive respond and the latter is to be intimidated. Experts said that as the women is getting more older; the more defensive will be.. So try to Then they'll be aggressive. I want to be free from that kind of social expecting. pressure and expectations. But to be honest, I’m still get feel stress ful from that. Actually, I’m not a never-married woman. I just haven’t yet met my Mr.right. I don’t want to marry just for merry. just get married. I want to meet someone who I love rather than be loved. Some of my friends and family blame me to refuse many man’s propose.a lot of man's proposal  but I’m not a bad girl. I just haven’t yet met my real love. Sometimes their blame hurt my feelings. If I got merry get married in early age, maybe I haven’t had as much many opportunity to travel many countries, study new things and make new foreigners friends. I tanks to my life that I have done what I want to I'm grateful that I could do all the things which I wanted to do and I’ve gone where I want to. I just want to enjoy my life. I constantly try to study new things and I never stop my challenge. My life is mine. I try to don’t care others talking about me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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