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SMALL CHANGES YOU DO TO MAKE YOUR ROUTINE EXCITING

Hi.Today I am going to tell about why small changes you do to make your routine exciting.First I will tell you what is a routine.Routine is a start of the day.Now you know what means routine,right.Then small changes make me happy because if my mom buy a new slime it is very chip then that's the small changes.Then I am so happy.This is why small change your routine more fun.Like you have a new pool then I am happy.Also just routine is fun but if we add small changes then we will have more fun.Do learn something?Then, Bye!

Hi.Today I am going to tell about why small changes you do to make your routine exciting.First I will tell you what is a routine.Routine is a start of the day.Now you know what means routine,right.Then small changes make me happy because if my mom buy a new slime it is very chip then that's the small changes.Then I am so happy.This is why small change your routine more fun.Like you have a new pool then I am happy.Also just routine is fun but if we add small changes then we will have more fun.Do learn something?Then, Bye!


Hi.Today I am going to tell about why small changes you do to make your routine exciting

VARIOUS INTRODUCTION DIFFERENT FROM YOUR USUAL PHRASE "TODAY I AM GOING TO TELL YOU..."

1. QUESTION: What simple things can SPICE UP [make exciting] a mundane [simple] routine...

2. STATEMENT: I like exciting things from time to time, here are some examples of small changes I do to my daily routines.

3. OPINION: Some people get bored of the same routine everyday...we can make small changes to SPICE THINGS UP [make things exciting]




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