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Discrimination is getting serious in the world. Racism is keeping problems in America. We often heard on news that white police shoot black people. That’s why Black people demonstrated widely this year. So many Asians supported them. But I heard some news that black people hit Asian due to Corona virus. Black people has been suffered from discrimination for a long time but they also has been discriminated against Asian. That was very ridiculous. Actually there are a lot of different kind of discrimination among us. We all know that discrimination is not good but honestly everyone has some discrimination. Most of people try to control discrimination by reason. Because we already learn about it and we know that what is wrong from right. We have a gender crimination in Korea. We sometimes heard about hatred for woman crime. And Even though Korean are angry with racial news but they also discriminate against China, blacks or East Asian people. We have some discrimination about special nation , for example, ‘ugly China’, ‘ugly India’ or ‘Russian is like a China in Europe’ etc. I admitted that I had some discrimination before but I try to cut out that kind of bad prejudice. I have many friends of various nationalities that help me to cut out discrimination. Everyone is equal regardless of racial, religion or gender. Everyone wants to be respected from others. There are no people who can be ignored in the world. We try to struggle some discrimination that we have . There are widespread discrimination that we do not recognize.

Discrimination is getting serious in the world. Racism is keeping has become a problems in America. We often heard on news that white police officers shoot black people. That’s why Due to this reason, Black people demonstrated widely this year. So many  In addition, Asians supported them. But I heard on some news that black people hit Asian due to the spread of Corona Virus. Black people has been suffered from discrimination for a long time but they also discriminates Asians has been discriminated against Asian. That was I think it is very ridiculous. Actually there are a lot of different various kind of discrimination among us. We all know that discrimination is not good but honestly everyone has some experience discrimination. Most of people try to control discrimination by reason. Bbecause we already learn about it.and wWall know that what is wrong from right. We also have a gender discrimination in Korea. We sometimes heard about hatred for woman crime. And Even though Koreans are angry with anti-racial news but they also discriminated against China, blacks or East Asian people. We have some discrimination hear some bad description about special nation all over the globe,  for example, ‘ugly China’, ‘ugly India’ or ‘Russian is like a China in Europe’ etc. I admitted that I had some discrimination discriminate before but I try to cut out that kind of bad prejudice. I have many friends of various nationalities that help me to cut out discrimination. Everyone is equal regardless of their race racial, religion or gender. Everyone wants to be respected from others. There are no people who can be ignored in the world. We shouldn't ignore people all around the world. We try to struggle some discrimination that we have . There are widespread discrimination that we do not recognize. We struggle on discrimination but there's a widespread problem that we don't recognize.

 

 

 

 


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