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Hi Venice.
As we are talking about dictation, I fully don't deliver my thought. I'm sorry
when you said that "when do we dictate?" friday?
did you think that I want to take dictation during your class ?
I was not going to say that meaning. I was going to say this.
After your class is over, I take dictaion MP3 file that we studied in your class.
I will use Joy English bulletin board (영어첨삭게시판) to correct my composition.
And I wonder if this way is good for me. I need to your advice.
I really want to improve my English ability. Thank you

Hi Venice.
As we are talking about dictation, I fully don't deliver my thought. I'm sorry
when you said that "when do we dictate?" friday?
did you think that I want to take dictation during your class ?
I was not going to say that meaning. I was going to say this.
After your class is over, I take dictaion MP3 file that we studied in your class.
I will use Joy English bulletin board (영어첨삭게시판) to correct my composition.
And I wonder if this way is good for me. I need to your advice.
I really want to improve my English ability. Thank you


Hi Venice.
As we were talking about dictation, I fully didn't deliver my thought well. I'm sorry.
You (said) asked me, (that) "When (do) will we do the dictation?” “Will it be on Friday?”,
did you think that I want to take the dictation during your class ?
(I was not going to say that meaning). = That’s not what I meant. I was about (going) to say this.
After (y) our class is over, I will take dictation MP3 file that we studied in (y) our class.
I will use the Joy English bulletin board (
영어첨삭게시판) to correct my composition.
And I wonder if this way is good for me. I need to your advice.
I really want to improve my English ability. Thank you~

 

Ohh, now I get it. Alright Pepper, I'm also sorry if I misunderstood you yesterday night. As your teacher, I'm suppose to understand and do your requests always. It will good for you I think. Try to listen to the recording of our class and practice what we had. Let's talk more about it later. ~


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