Hi.Today I am going to tell you why we need to exercise.First reason is we need to exercise because if we eat so many our body became fat and we can be sick.So sometimes we need to exercise to be healthy and strong.And second reason is if ewe eat
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Hi.Today I am going to tell you why we need to exercise.First reason Is THE FIRST REASON IS/FIRST, / FIRST OF ALL...we need to exercise because if we eat so many [many is used for COUNT NOUNS, the noun FOOD is NON-COUNT therefore we need to use MUCH] IF WE EAT TOO MUCH FOOD our body became [BECAME IS PAST TENSE use BECOMES - it means it will happen as a result and should be FUTURE TENSE ]and we can be sick.So sometimes we need to exercise to be healthy and strong.And second reason is if ewe eat
