My day

I talked with my friend at the dinner table.
She said about her goal in her life.
She was a hard worker and wanted to make money a lot.
She doesn't want to go back to her 20s again since she has been working so hard and she didn't take propr rest.
I agreed and I reminded my 20s again.
I worked hard but I didn't study hard.
There is one thing I regret is not to study hard when I was young.
My mom was pretty supportive but I didn't try enough.
It has been three months when I started Joy English and It has been helpful
I will do my very best to study hard

Corrections:

I chatted with a friend at the dinner table.
She talked about her life goals.
She worked hard and wanted to make a lot of money.
She doesn't want to go back to her 20s because she worked hard and didn't get adequate rest.
I agreed and reminded me again in my twenties.
I worked hard, but I didn't study hard.
What I regret is not studying hard when I was younger.
My mom was pretty supportive, but I didn't try hard enough.
It's been 3 months since I started Joy English and it was helpful.
I will do my best to study hard.

 

Great job Jenny :)