Well, I want to talk about a memorable movie I have seen. It was the most exciting movie that I've ever seen, its title is "Avengers End Game." I was so thrilled to watch it. It was so memorable because the Avengers got together, but also very sad because some of them became dust because Thanos, which was the villain of the movie, snapped the gauntlet and that made some avengers disappear. I was so thrilled because the members that are alive tried to save the other members. The remaining avengers were Iron man, Captain America, Hulk, Thor, Black widow, Doctor Strange, and so on. They are all brave but Hulk became weaker than before. My mom is a great fan of Iron man and she thinks he is very smart and she said it was so touching and moving when he said, "Love you 3000". My father said it's kind of boring because the first part was not that good, so he took a nap. But when the middle part comes on, he woke up because of the exciting sounds and he thought it was thrilling after all. Lucas and I were simultaneously sad because Iron man was dead. It was kind of more devastating because Iron Man had a daughter and a wife and if I were him, I would be so sorry and worried about them and I am sure Iron Man feels the same. Kevin said the movie was splendid and a little sad, but still it was generally nice. I think the same, too. After the movie, I was so sad but also thought that Iron man had no choice. And I had no choice but to go home, too.^^
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Movie
2021.03.29
Well, to talk about a memorable movie I have seen, it was an exciting movie that I've ever seen which was "Avengers end game." I was so thrilled to watch it. It was so memorable because the Avengers got together, but also very sad because some of the avenger's members became dust because Thanos which the villain of the movie, and the last movie which was "Infinity War" and he snapped with the gauntlet and that made some avengers members disappear. And I was so thrilled because the members that are alive try to save other members that are not alive. To talk about the members that are left, which were Iron man, Captain America, Hulk, Thor, Black widow, doctor strange, and so on. They are all brave but hulk becomes weak than before. And my mom is a great fan of Iron man and she thinks he is very smart and she said it was so touching and moving when he said " Love you 3000". And my father said it's kind of boring and thrilled because the first part was not that good so he took a nap but when it became the middle part he woke up because of the exciting sounds and he thought it was thrilled as well. Lucas and I were simultaneously sad because Iron man was dead. And it was kind of more sad because an iron man had a daughter and a wife and if I were him, I would be so sorry and worried about them and I am sure Iron man feels the same, and Kevin said the movie was splendid and a little sd but still it was generally nice. I think the same. After the movie, I was so sad but also thought that Iron man had no choice. And I had no choice but to go home.^^
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