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Hi~~

It's been a long time no see at here~^^;
You know, I have been pretty busy trading stocks lately.
Fortunately,I still earned small money. I'm very satisfied the money even that it's a little.^^

Anyway, I have a good news. Actually, my family have a good news.
The news is my brother starts to seeing someone.
Maybe I haven't told you about my brother. Is it right?
My brother is 41 years old. But he hasn't married yet. Moreover, he hasn't had a girlfriend for a couple of year.
So my family including me have worried about him.
However he is seeing someone now. All of my family are expecting he might marry soon.ㅎㅎㅎ

Today is precious weekend but It's raining during all day. I hope your area will be sunny.
Have a good weekend and see you later~~!^^

Correction:

It has been a long time since the last time I wrote to you a letter. 
You know, I have been pretty busy trading stocks lately.
Unfortunately, I am still earning a small amount of money, but I'm very satisfied even if it's just small.^^

Anyway, I have a good news. Actually, my family has a good news.
The news is my brother started to see someone.
Maybe I haven't told you about my brother. Is it right?
My brother is 41 years old, but he is still a batchelor. Moreover, he hasn't had a girlfriend for a couple of years.
So, my family including me have been worried about him.
However, he is seeing someone now. All of my family members are expecting he might marry soon.ㅎㅎㅎ

Today is a precious weekend, but it has been raining all day. I hope your area will be sunny.
Have a good weekend and see you later~~!^^

 

Reply: 

Hi Hailey! It's indeed a great news. What a joyful announcement. I want to congratulate you and your family; most especially your brother.  I'm sure they will be a wonderful couple. May the two of them be blessed as they begin the journey that will lead them to a lifetime together. Best wishes and blessings to you and your family. <3

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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