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I haven’t yet known that I want to live in city or country. When I had lived in city, I always miss nature environment so I used to go countryside to enjoy my weekends. But when I had lived in countryside, I sometimes missed city life. Sometimes I went to city, my heart was beating with exciting. Country life has many good things that we can take it easy and slow life. But sometimes it’s very boring. City is very convenient to do everything, shopping, eating outside, transportation etc. people always want or miss what they don’t have. Maybe for happiness need to learn satisfaction. Many people thought more money will lead more happy. Human’s natural desire is not easy to satisfy. The more you have, the more you want. Many people don’t know when they have to stop. Just earn money whole life and then they will regret it one day. We need courage to stop when we need to stop. When I decided to quit my job, many people around me against it. But I already satisfied what I have. I’m not greedy. I just want to live according what I want. I want to enjoy my life without stress. Sometimes I thought that if I wouldn’t quit my job, maybe I could buy more expensive car and house when I met one person who is around my age to drive foreign car and neglect me. I quickly tried to change my mind to focus on what I have and what I enjoy. Happiness doesn’t depend on how much we have. It depend on ourselves and who you are with. So I try to be with someone who thinks the same as me. I thank to my friends who can share our life style.

I haven’t known yet that if I want to live in city or countryside. When I had lived in city, I always miss the nature environment so I used to go to the countryside to enjoy my weekends. But when I had lived in countryside, I sometimes missed the city life. Sometimes I went to the city, my heart was beating with excitingMy heart beats fast everytime I go to the city. The Ccountry life has many a lot of good things that we can take it easy and slow life. wherein we can just relax and take things easy. But sometimes it’s very There are some times that it's too boring. City life is very convenient to do everything, shopping, eating outside, transportation etc. people always want or miss what they don’t have. Maybe for happiness need to learn satisfaction. Maybe we need to be satisfied in order to feel happy. Many A lot of people thought having more money will lead more happy.happiness. Human’s natural desire is not easy to satisfy. The more you have, the more you want. Many A lot of people don’t know when they have to stop. Just earn money for their whole life and then they will regret it one day. We need courage to stop when we need to stopit's needed. When I decided to quit my job, many a lot of people around me against it. But I'm already satisfied with what I have. I’m not greedy. I just want to live according what I want. I want to enjoy my life without stress. Sometimes I thought that if I wouldn’t quit my job, maybe I could buy more expensive car and house when I met one person who is around my age to drive foreign car and neglect me. I quickly tried to change my mind to focus on what I have and what I enjoy. Happiness doesn’t depend on how much we have. It depend on ourselves and who you are with. So I'll try to be with someone who thinks the same as me. I thank to my friends whom I can share our  the same life style as I do.

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