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Last Friday, I went to Stockholm with a friend of mine to enjoy our weekend. Because we are living in another city of Sweden, we need to take a train to Stockholm. When we arrived Stockholm, it was sunny. And we were so happy with the weather and location of our hotel. It was in central of Stockholm so it was easy to access many hot spots in the city. Next day, we started our day with exciting emotion. But we could not happy any longer when we went to outside of the hotel. It was cold and windy and seemed like to rain soon. Indeed, it rained a lot soon and the wind couldn't help us to grab an umbrella. Especially for my friend, it was too bad because she never had any good memories in Stockholm since her first visiting. Since there were not many options to enjoy the sightseeing, we found nice place to have some sweets. And we talked with our current issues and eat very delicious cake with hot chocolate. The sweets soothe our disappointments and brought us hilarious. Also we went to Korean restaurant and we were so surprised with menu in there. We didn't expect too much about the varieties of food and taste. But we found very rare Korean dishes in abroad also the taste was awesome. Because of the nice food, we were fully compensated to the bad weather. Unfortunately, the weather didn't get better on the next day. And we heard that it was the coldest day and 3 times much rain in May in Stockholm since 1962. We just gave meaning to our trip for the visiting in historical day. Even though it was not a successful trip, it gave us understand and comfort our stress each other.

Last Friday, I went to Stockholm with a friend of mine to enjoy our weekend. Because Since we are living live in another city of Sweden, we needed to take a train going to Stockholm city. When we arrived to Stockholm, the weather it was sunny day. And we were so happy with the weather and location of our hotel. It was at the center of Stockholm so it was easy for us to access go to many hot spot places in the city. Next day, we started our day with excitement. But the happiness in our faces had been faded as we went outside of the hotel. It was cold and windy and it seemed like it was about to rain. Indeed, after just a few minutes it rained a lot soon and the wind couldn't help didn’t let us to grab an umbrella. Especially for my friend, it was too bad because she never had any good memories in Stockholm since her first visit. Since Even there were just not many few options to enjoy the sightseeing view, we still found a nice place to have some sweets. And We talked with about our current issues and eat ate a very delicious cake with hot chocolate. The sweets soothed our disappointments and brought us hilarious feeling. Also we went to a Korean restaurant and we were so surprised with the menu in there. We didn't expect too much about the varieties of food and taste that they have, but we found a very rare Korean dishes in abroad also the taste was awesome. Because of the nice food, we were fully compensated to the bad weather. Unfortunately, the weather didn't get better on until the next day. And we heard that it was the coldest day and 3 times much rain in May in Stockholm since 1962. We just wanted to gave make our trip meaningful to our trip for the by visiting an historical place.in historical day. Even though it was not a successful trip, we still had a moment where in we were able to understand and comfort each other in times of stress. it gave us understand and comfort our stress each other.


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