Hi!Today I am going tell you about why we should behave in school/class.Now I will tell you 4 reason that we need to behave in the school and class.1 reason is you are little then you're teacher so you should behave kind.2 reason is if you want to have a friend you should be behave so the friend will think you are good and want to be your friend.3 reason is teacher is always looking you're behave so you need to be kind,so you're will say you can learn in this school.Or if you behave bad then you can't learn in this school.4 reason is you're dad or mom work hard and give million dollars you need to study hard in that school.Now do you know that why we should behave in school and class.If you want learn more then see you next time.Bye!
Hi!Today I am going tell you about why we should behave in school/class.Now I will tell you 4 reason that we need to behave in the school and class.
2 sentences are the same/similar, use only one 
.1 reason is you are little then
When itemizing use expressiong like
- First [reason] Second [reason] etc
- First of all Second of all...
- Firstly Secondly....
Nice work Yumin!
I hope more students behave like you in class. Very responsive mature and pays attention in class. 🦄 🎈 🌟🌸💎
