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This story which I’m willing to tell is related in my religion, I mean, I was an wanderer who left the God for a long time, but actually I didn’t lost the believe for him, just not not wanted to involved terrible arguments between believers who insist their opinion is all right each other. Nevertheless, I left the church, I still love and believe him though long time ago. And I got a blissful message from one of my favorite pastor. He suggested and gave the message I have to pray all single moments entire my whole life. It’s my duty as well, he said. Suddenly, that offer touched me when I read the message. I think it’s time to go back to him now.

This story which I’m willing to tell is related in my religion, I mean, I was an wanderer who left the God for a long time, but actually I didn’t lost the believe for him, just not not wanted to involved terrible arguments between believers who insist their opinion is all right each other. Nevertheless, I left the church, I still love and believe him though long time ago. And I got a blissful message from one of my favorite pastor. He suggested and gave the message I have to pray all single moments entire my whole life. It’s my duty as well, he said. Suddenly, that offer touched me when I read the message. I think it’s time to go back to him now.

 

Corrections:

This story which I’m willing to tell is related to my religion, I mean, I was a wanderer who left God a long time ago, but actually, I didn’t lose the belief in him, just not wanted to involve terrible arguments between believers who insist their opinion is all right each other. Nevertheless, I left the church, I still love and believe him though a long time ago. And I got a blissful massage from one of my favorite pastors. He suggested and gave the message I have to pray all single moments entire my whole life. It’s my duty as well, he said. Suddenly, that offer touched me when I read the message. I think it’s time to go back to him now.


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