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The game is called Omok and it is good for kids. I think we should play Omok in class.

How to win is you make a five Go stone strait. When you make four or three-three, you can win. So when your opponent make three you need to stop it or you will lose.

Anyone can know and learn it easily and quickly. And it can make brain good. It is good and comfortable to carry it because it is light. And it is very fun, when you learn it. when you learn Omok and then think it is easy, you will want to do The game of go. And when you learn The game of go, you will want to do other games and you can do many games.

The game is called Omok and it is good for kids. I think we should play Omok in class.

 

I think we should play Omok a game in class. The game is called Omok and it is good for kids.


How to win is you need make a five Go stone strait straight, when you make four or three-three, you can almost win. So when your opponent make makes three you need to stop it or you will lose.


Anyone can know and learn it easily and quickly. And It can make brain make the brain good. It is good and comfortable to carry it because it is light. And it It is very fun, when you learn it. when you learn Omok and then think it is easy, So, when you learn how to play omok you will think that it just easy. You will also want like to play the game "GO" and when you learned how to play the game "Go" you will also like to play the other games..o do The game of go. And when you learn The game of go, you will want to do other games and you can do many games.

 


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