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Plastic surgery&skin care in Korea

When I was in China, I realized that so many Chinese misunderstand that most of Korean got the plastic surgery. They thought that most of Korean parents take their daughter to hospital to get double eyed plastic surgery after they are 18 years old and most of entertainer in Korea got plastic surgery so they look like same. So I depended not like that. Then they asked to me close my eyes and check it up. I think some factors lead to them to make that kind of prejudice. Plastic surgery in Korea is famous in the world. In fact, Korean has very good hand skill that’s why they can get fame in many fields. Another reason is exaggerated advertisement. Hospital is doing a commercial to collect more foreigners patients. Many foreigners have been Korea to get plastic surgery. Natural is most important on plastic surgery. But I saw some people who got the plastic surgery in China, they are not natural, maybe failed. Everyone can figure out they got the plastic surgery. So many Chinese woman have dream to go to Korea to get plastic surgery. And they said Korean has good skin because they go to hospital to take care as regular. It’s not like that. Korea woman just knew how to care their skin and wear sunscreen everyday. I found that Korean has many information how to care their health and skin than other countries include Europe and America. Sometimes they asked to me how I know that information. But that information is very common in Korea. Maybe Korean is very interested in health and we have many tv programs about that moreover everyone can easy to research on internet.

When I was in China, I realized that so many Chinese misunderstand misunderstood that most of Korean got the plastic surgery. They thought that most of Korean parents take their daughter to hospital to get double eyed plastic surgery after they are upon reaching 18 years old and most of entertainer in Korea got plastic surgery so they look like same. So I depended not like that. I explained it to them. Then, they asked to me close my eyes and to check it up. I think  thought of some factors lead to them to make that kind of prejudice. Plastic surgery in Korea is famous in the world. In fact, Korean has very good great hand skill that’s why they can get famemous in many fields. Another reason is that was an exaggerated advertisement. Most Hhospital is doing a are releasing this kind of commercial to collect gather/persuade more foreigners patients. Many foreigners have been  to Korea to get plastic surgery. Natural-looking procedure is most important on plastic surgery. But I saw some people who got the plastic surgery in China, they are not don't natural at all, maybe it was a failed. Everyone can figure out if  they got the plastic surgery. So many a lot of Chinese woman  women have dreamt to go to Korea of going to South Korea to get plastic surgery. And tThey said Korean has good skin complexion because they go to hospital to take care of their skin as on a regular basis . It’s not wasn't like that. Korea woman  women just knew how to care their skin and wear sunscreen everyday. I found out that Korean has many a lot of information how to care their health and skin than other countries includeing Europe and America. Sometimes, they asked to me how did I know that information. But that information is very common in Korea. Maybe Korean is very interested in health and we have many tv programs about that. Mmoreover everyone can easyily to research on internet.

 


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