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I think I’ve already addicted to smart phone. I prefer to using smart phone to watch it than TV screen. Because It’s more easy to concentrate for me to watch movie using smart phone. Moreover I’m getting prefer watch something alone with smart phone than watch it with others using TV. If I forgot to bring smart phone , I couldn’t concentrate anything. I felt frustrated all day. That means that I’m a one of smart phone addicts. It’s a very common sight that most of friends or family members watch smart phone during have meal together. We can easy to see that most of people bow their head and use smartphone when they use public transportation. Korea is very famous about fastest internet speed in the world. Moreover they serve free WiFi in public places. Foreigners who visit to Korea are surprised about free WiFi and internet speed. They said that Korea is the paradise of internet user. The environment of internet made us easy to addict smart phone. China is more serious to addict smart phone. The data fee in China is cheap. That’s why most of people watch video in public transportation without earphones. They haven’t that kind of manner yet. Even though baby is watched smartphone by their parents. Parents in China haven’t known that watching smart phone is not good to baby. Moreover people selling something on road also watch video on smart phone all days. Customers choose product and scan bar-code for paying by themselves. I already sensed my problems of smart phone addiction. I try to expand time without using smartphone.

I think  I'm I’ve already addicted to smart phone. I prefer to using use smart phone to watch it than using the TV screen. Because It’s more easy to concentrate for me to watch movie using smart phone. Moreover I’m getting prefer to watch something alone with my smart phone than watch it with others using TV. If I forgot to bring my smart phone, I couldn’t concentrate on anything. I feel so frustrated all day. That means that I’m a one of those smart phone addicts. It’s a very common sight that most of friends or family members watch using theirsmart phone during have meal together. We can easy easilty to see that most of people bow their head and use smarphone when they use public transportation. Korea is very famous about fastest internet speed in the world. Moreover they serve free WiFi in public places. Foreigners who visit to Korea are surprised about free WiFi and the internet speed. They said that Korea is the paradise of  for an internet user. The environment of internet (cyberspace)made us easy to addicted t\o smart phones. China is more serious to when it comes to smart phone addiction. The data fee in China is cheap. That’s why most of people watch videos in public transportation without earphones. They haven’t that kind of manner yet. Even thoughbaby is watched smartphone by their parents.  In addition, the parents allow their babies to watch using their smartphones. Parents in China haven’t known that letting a baby watching smart phone is not good to for the baby. Moreover people selling something on road also watch video on their smart phone all days. Customers choose product and scan bar-code for and paying it by themselves. I already sensed my problems of smart phone addiction. I will try to expand time without using smartphone.


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