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Most of teacher at open school has pride and have very close relationships. When I was absent school dinner, principal visited my class room and mention it. I dislike to force to drink liquor. I always made excuses that I had to drive. But problem is that there is driving business in Korea. Another problem of school dinner is eating too much. I watched one journal about our health, we should reduce eating and arising muscles exercise when we are getting older. But now a days l’ve changed style of drink. I prefer drink alone. I drink alone with watching movie. I think pandemic have changed me a lot. I can focus on my own. I watched news that expert warn about drink alone and too often drink at home during pandemic. Because of pandemic many people have stared to drink at home but very often. Which is worse to drink alcohol often or drink a lot? The answer is drink often. Even just drink small a mount of alcohol, our liver has to work not to rest. So the important thing is let our liver can take a rest without alcohol for few days. If we drink a cup of alcohol every day, our liver can’t take a rest. But I will be carful of frequent of drink. If we don’t drink for a long time, our liver loose the function of detoxification of alcohol. Some enzyme for detoxification of alcohol is disappear. Moderate to drink is important. I leave pictures of the drink I had alone during pandemic. Even though many countries already have stared to vaccines for COVID-19, but it seems unlikely to end later this year. I look forward to share our memories how to endure during pandemic one day.

Most of teachers at an open school has pride and have are very close relationships. When I was absent at a school dinner, the principal visited my class room and mention about it. I dislike to it when they forced us to drink liquor. I always made excuses that I had to drive. But problem is that there is a driving business chauffer services in Korea. Another problem of at a school dinner is eating too much. I watched one journal about our health, we should reduce eating and arising muscles exercise when we are getting older. But now a days l’ve changed style of drink. my drinking habits. I prefer to drink alone. I drink alone with while watching a movie. I think the pandemic have changed me a lot. I can focus on my own. I watched news that experts warn about drink alone and drinking too often at home during pandemic. Because of pandemic many people have stared to drink at home but very often. until it became a bad habit. Which is worse to often drink alcohol  or to drink a lot? The answer is to drink often. Evenif you just drink small amount of alcohol, our liver has to work not to rest. is affected. So the important thing is let our liver can take a rest without alcohol for few days. If we drink a cup of alcohol every day, our liver can’t take a rest. it may be bad for our liver. But I will be careful of frequent of drink. not frequently drink now. If we don’t drink for a long time, our liver loose the function of detoxification  detoxifyingof alcohol. Some enzymes for detoxification  detoxifying of  the alcohol is will disappear. Moderate to drinking is important. I leave left some pictures of the drink that I had drank alone during pandemic. Even though many countries already have stared to vaccines for COVID-19, but it seems unlikely to end later this year. I look forward to share our memories how to  we endure during  the pandemic one day.


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