My summer was amazing!When I am hot I a drank juice with a ice.Yummy,then I asked my mom "Can I turn air conditioner mom?"My mom said okay since it's to hot.I sit in a chair and watch TV.Finally its last day of summer before summer goes I will play with summer by doing cool things that's so fun and cool.First I turn the air conditioner then ,I get a cool juice with ice and a orange cut into pieces.I was so cold.My mom said go outside and play with your friends.But I still want to have a summer but I also think I am to cold so I g outside and play with friends.
When no one was looking, she opened the door
My LAST summer was amazing!When I WAS hot I a drank juice with a ice.Yummy,then I asked my mom "Can I turn air conditioner mom?"My mom said okay since it's It was too hot.I sit SAT in a chair and watch WATCHED TV.Finally its WAS THE last day of summer before summer goes I will play with summer by doing cool things that's so fun and cool.First I turn the air conditioner then ,I get a cool juice with ice and a orange cut into pieces.I was so cold.My mom said go outside and play with your friends.But I still want to have a summer but I also think I am to cold so I g outside and play with friends.
This is nice Yumin you put more sentences in your story, more details means you put more effort and creativity
