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Finally, I found this!

I read your messages. Thank you so much. There were many things I can learn.
And I saw your big dogs! How big cute dogs!!
I have not had a big dog. I always wondered about living with big dogs.
I think it may more be hard to take care, but more be able to feel love. Is it right?

Did I tell you about my old poodle? He is smart and so friendly.
Sometimes I worried about his condition(he is 13 years old). I hope he will be with us for long long time.

It's time to pick up my kid.
It takes 30 minutes to write this...ㅠㅠ(this means crying.ㅋㅋ) I believe someday I will be able to write more quickly!:)
See you tomorrow~~ bye~~:)

I read your messages, thank you so much! I learned a lot of things.
I saw your big dogs; how big and cute dogs they are!!
I have not had a big dog before. I always wondered about living with big dogs.
I think it may be harder to take care of, but more lovable. Is it right?

Did I tell you about my old poodle? He is smart and so friendly.
Sometimes I worried about his condition, he is 13 years old. I hope he will be with us for a very long time.

It's time to pick up my kid.
It takes 30 minutes to write this...ㅠㅠ(this means crying.ㅋㅋ) I believe someday I will be able to write more quickly!:)
See you tomorrow~~ bye~~:)

 

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Dear Hailey, 

I feel so happy to be able to see your message again.  About your question, I think all dogs are just the same; they are all lovable. I just prefer big dogs because I used to have an active lifestyle. I used to run and climb mountains together with them. Now, I just enjoy cuddling, playing and talking with them. Oh yes, I talk to pets.  Your dog is blessed to have a family that loves him and to have a long life. I also wish him good health.  How about you, what are the things that you enjoy doing? 


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