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Dear Grace teacher

1. Hi Grace teacher, I'm Logan.

2. First I want to say thank you.

3. Before I start Fuzzle English, I was not good at English.

4. But when I start, I think my English skill is now very improve.

5. And that's why my dream become interpreter.

6. Second, thank you for making me diligent.

7. Before Fuzzle English I couldn't riffle two hours for studying English.

8. Lastly, I want to say what I hope.

9. I;'m wonder that you are seeing my writings.

10. I hope you read my writings.

11. And also I hope I can go to the Fuzzle English.

12. it's more comfortable to study onliine class, But I think going to academy is more helpful.

13. Thank you for reading my letter and see you later!

14. Oh, and I wish you make 'Fuzzle math!'

1. Hi Grace teacher, I'm Logan.
Hi teacher Grace, I'm Logan.
2. First I want to say thank you.
First of all, I want to say thank you.
3. Before I start Fuzzle English, I was not good at English.
Before I start learning in Fuzzle English, I was not good at English.
4. But when I start, I think my English skill is now very improve.
But when I started learning, I think my English skill is now improving a lot.
5. And that's why my dream become interpreter.
And that's the reason why my dream is to become an interpreter. 
6. Second, thank you for making me diligent.
Second, thank you for making me diligent.
7. Before Fuzzle English I couldn't riffle two hours for studying English.
Before Fuzzle English I couldn't riffle two hours for studying English.
8. Lastly, I want to say what I hope.
Lastly, I want to say what I hope for.
9. I;'m wonder that you are seeing my writings.
I wonder if you are seeing my writings.
10. I hope you read my writings.
I hope you read my writings.
11. And also I hope I can go to the Fuzzle English.
And also, I hope I can go to Fuzzle English.
12. it's more comfortable to study onliine class, But I think going to academy is more helpful.
It's more comfortable to study online class but I think going to academy is more helpful.
13. Thank you for reading my letter and see you later!
Thank you for reading my letter and see you later.
14. Oh, and I wish you make 'Fuzzle math!'

Oh! and I wish you make "Fuzzle Math"! :)

 

Very good Logan! You did well and keep it up. ^^


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