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Generally speaking, most power plants use a circulating water system to transfer the waste heat generated by steam cycle into the ambient environment. The pipeline end point location to intake water, intake head, was designed 1 km away considering the design inlet temperature and avoidance of taking the outlet water back. 4 pipelines are required to take in the proper amount water at the same time.
HDPE was applied as pipeline material, the details of story will be followed next slide. You can see this concept design in this photo taken from Google earth. And then, you can see the scene we were preparing the sinking of the pipeline.
Ok, for details of material, let’s move on the next slide.

Slide 5
Generally speaking, most power plants use a circulating water system to transfer the waste heat generated by steam cycle into the ambient environment. The pipeline end point location to intake water, intake head, was designed 1 km away considering the design inlet temperature and avoidance of taking the outlet water back. 4 pipelines are required to take in the proper amount water at the same time.
HDPE was applied as pipeline material, the details of story will be followed next slide. You can see this concept design in this photo taken from Google earth. And then, you can see the scene we were preparing the sinking of the pipeline.
Ok, for details of material, let’s move on the next slide.


Generally speaking, most power plants use a circulating water system to transfer the waste heat generated by steam cycle into the ambient environment. The pipeline’s end point location to intake water, intake head, was designed 1 km away considering the design inlet temperature and avoidance of taking the outlet water back. Four pipelines are required to take in the proper amount of water at the same time.
HDPE was applied as pipeline material and the details of the story will be (followed) shown on the next slide. You can see this concept design in this photo taken from Google earth. And (then,) you can also see the scene where in we were preparing the sinking of the pipeline.
Ok, for the details of the materials, let’s move (on) to the next slide.


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