2.Dodgeball is fun.
3.I played dodgeball in school.
4.I threw the dodgeball.
5.Hit the other team's student was difficult.
6.I want to play dodgeball again.
7.But I transfer to another school.
8.And I can't go to school because of the corona virus.
9.I haven't play dodgeball over 1 year.
10.I hope to play dodgeball someday.
11.I also like baseball and ping-pong.
12.I like to play baseball with my dad.
13.My dad threw a ball,and I hit it.
14.But my dad and I can't go out thesedays.
15.Because I have too much math homeworks.
16.I also like to play ping-pong with my dad.
17.I can play ping-pong.
18.But my dad and I can't go out to play ping-pong.
19.Because there is no ping-pong court in this town.
20.I am so sad...
1. My favorite sport is dodgeball.
2. Dodgeball is fun.
3. I play dodgeball in school.
4. I throw the dodgeball.
5. Hitting the other team is difficult.
6. I want to play dodgeball again.
7. But I transferred to another school.
8. And I can't go to school because of the corona virus.
9. I haven't played dodgeball for over a year.
10.I hope to play dodgeball someday.
11.I also like baseball and ping-pong.
12.I like to play baseball with my dad.
13. My dad throws the ball and I hit it.
14. But my dad and I can't go out these days.
15. Because I have too much (a lot of) math homeworks.
16.I also like to play ping-pong with my dad.
17. I can play ping-pong.
18. But my dad and I can't go out to play ping-pong.
19. Because there is no ping-pong court in this town.
20. I am so sad...
Hello, Ruby!
I hope you can play again soon. You have minimal lapses on your writing, however when writing a composition try to do it paragraph form like this;
My favorite sport is dodgeball. It is fun and I play it in school. I throw the dodgeball, but hitting other team's players is difficult. I want to play dodgeball again, but I transfered to another school and I go to school because of Corona virus. I haven't played dodgeball for over a year. I hope I can play dodgeball again someday.
I also like baseball and pingpong. I like to play baseball with my dad. My dad throws the ball and I hit it, but my dad and I can't go these days because I have a lot of math homework. I also like to play pingpong with my dad, but we can't go out to play because there isn't any pingpong court in this town. I am so sad.
