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Thank you kk

4:21 I will (lesson?) for today. It's about (word?) ( ??? )

7:34 Definitely, You have to ( ), right? what other people are ( ) around you

8:23 What is South Korea's ( ? )

9:20 (laugh) Let's ( ) continue number 8
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Could you check if my sentence is correct or not. And Correct this, please.

I am very precise about what I do.
For instance, while I was in Australia, I worked for a cleaning company at a pub.
There were many cleaning companies in Brisbane in Australia that are very competitive.
So, if the employers who hired a cleaning company for his pub didn't like the output,
they easily tended to change the cleaning company.
For this reason, All the bosses of the cleaning companies wanted workers to be precise.
In my case, I worked not only as worker but also supervisor because I am very precise about what I do
I believe I consider myself a suitable person to be in charge of designing ship or plant and other required tasks in your company.
You can be sure I won’t make a mistake with my punctilious nature.



Thank you very much~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you kk

4:21 I will (lesson?) for today. It's about (word?) ( ??? )

7:34 Definitely, You have to ( ), right? what other people are ( ) around you

8:23 What is South Korea's ( ? )

9:20 (laugh) Let's ( ) continue number 8
-----------------------------
Could you check if my sentence is correct or not. And Correct this, please.

I am very precise about what I do.
For instance, while I was in Australia, I worked for a cleaning company at a pub.
There were many cleaning companies in Brisbane in Australia that are very competitive.
So, if the employers who hired a cleaning company for his pub didn't like the output,
they easily tended to change the cleaning company.
For this reason, All the bosses of the cleaning companies wanted workers to be precise.
In my case, I worked not only as worker but also supervisor because I am very precise about what I do
I believe I consider myself a suitable person to be in charge of designing ship or plant and other required tasks in your company.
You can be sure I won’t make a mistake with my punctilious nature.



Thank you very much~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!


Thank you kk

4:21 I will (lesson?) for today. It's about (word?) ( ??? ) = Our lesson for today is about what? Do you still remember?

7:34 Definitely, You have to (adopt), right? What other people are (doing ) around you

8:23 What is South Korea's ( best )? What is it known for?

9:20 (laugh) Let's (now) continue number 8
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Could you check if my sentences (is) are correct or not. And correct this, please.

I am very precise about what I do.
For instance, while I was in Australia, I worked for a cleaning company at a pub.
There are many cleaning companies in Brisbane, (in) Australia that are very competitive.
So, if the employers who hire a cleaning company for his pub don't like the output, they easily tend to change the cleaning company.
For this reason, all the bosses of the cleaning companies wanted workers to be precise.
In my case, I worked not only as a worker but also as a supervisor because I am very precise (about what) with the things I do.
I believe I (consider myself) am a suitable person to be in charge of designing ship or plant and other required tasks in your company.
You can be sure I won’t make a mistake with my punctilious nature.



Thank you very much~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!


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