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resolution of June

As starting of June, I decided to follwing list for my perpect changing my job.
first, I will go to bed early and wake up early and as soon as i go sleep or wake up, i will pray for my hope.
Second, I will enjoy studying English and Computation account. especially, I think studying English with Venice is the most important, so i eagar to participate in Venice's class
Lastly, I will dirnk water a lot because my health. and I have to exercise to be more healty and good figure lol


I prepared follwing sentance. Please examine wonder i correctly write..

In korea, people worry about "Mers" that is infectious disease.
Aready, there are 18 person who get Mers.
So I have to be careful. as soon as i arrive at home, i keep my hands clean, and i rinse my mouth.
i hope to prevent the spread of Mers

As starting of June, I decided to follwing list for my perpect changing my job.
first, I will go to bed early and wake up early and as soon as i go sleep or wake up, i will pray for my hope.
Second, I will enjoy studying English and Computation account. especially, I think studying English with Venice is the most important, so i eagar to participate in Venice's class
Lastly, I will dirnk water a lot because my health. and I have to exercise to be more healty and good figure lol


I prepared follwing sentance. Please examine wonder i correctly write..

In korea, people worry about "Mers" that is infectious disease.
Aready, there are 18 person who get Mers.
So I have to be careful. as soon as i arrive at home, i keep my hands clean, and i rinse my mouth.
i hope to prevent the spread of Mers


As (starting of) June started, I decided to follow (ing) a list (for my) to perfect everything as I change my job.
First, I will go to bed (early) and wake up early. And as soon as I go to sleep or wake up, I will pray for my hope.
Second, I will enjoy studying English and Computation account. (especially,) I think studying English with Venice is the most important
thing, so Iam eager to participate in Venice's class
Lastly, I will
drink water a lot because of my health. (and) I have to exercise to be (more) healthier and to have a good figure too. (lol)


I am prepared in foll
owing sentences. Please examine (wonder) if I (correctly) write correctly.

In
Korea, people are worried about "MERS". (that) It is an infectious disease.
(Aready,)
There are already 18 persons who got MERS.
So I have to be careful.
As soon as I arrive at home, I keep my hands clean, and I rinse my mouth.
I hope to prevent the spreading of MERS.

 

Hi Pepper. Please study the words that should be capitalized.

Thank you so muxh for writing! ~


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