It is how to writing in English each subject. We use the Paragraph writing book.
This week subject is "My saddest moment"
so, could you check my text?
My saddest moment
I was seriosuly sick five years ago. The day I got hospital was the seddest moment in my life.
I was feeling weak.
I couldn't sleep at everynight and I didn't eat food enough.
So, I has to take a rest for overcome the sadness.
I did exercise like Yo-ga everyday.
I tryed to eat fresh food. and I tryed to get positive think
My best friend and I study English every Wednesday.
We write in English for each subject. We use the Paragraph writing book.
This week's subject is "My saddest moment"
Could you check my text?
My saddest moment
I was seriosuly sick five years ago. The day I got into the hospital was the saddest moment of my life.
I was feeling weak.
I couldn't sleep at night, and I couldn't eat enough.
To overcome my sadness, I took a lot of rest.
I exercised everyday, like doing Yo-ga.
I tried to eat fresh food, and tried to be optimistic.
