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Let`t me tell you about my best friend

Let`t me tell you about my best friend. My first impression of her was not very good,
beacuse she seemed a little cold. When I was in middle school, there was a new student who came to our school.
I remember when I spoke to her first time, she was rather brusque.
As I got to her, I realized I was mistaken in my first impression of her.
She explained that she was too shy to speak to strangers. In terms of her personality,
she is actually very caring and sweet. She is good istener, so I can easily talk woth her and ask for advice. Since we have many things in common, we share similar hobbies. We both like going to cafe over a cup of tea. I`m deeply grateful to
have met her, because we have such a good time together. whenever I`. down, she is the only person who can cheer me up.

Let`t me tell you about my best friend. My first impression of her was not very good,
beacuse she seemed a little cold. When I was in middle school, there was a new student who came to our school.
I remember when I spoke to her first time, she was rather brusque.
As I got to her, I realized I was mistaken in my first impression of her.
She explained that she was too shy to speak to strangers. In terms of her personality,
she is actually very caring and sweet. She is good istener, so I can easily talk woth her and ask for advice. Since we have many things in common, we share similar hobbies. We both like going to cafe over a cup of tea. I`m deeply grateful to
have met her, because we have such a good time together. whenever I`. down, she is the only person who can cheer me up.


Correction:

Let(`t) me tell you about my best friend. My first impression of her was not very good,
because she seemed a little cold. When I was in middle school, (there was) a new student (who) came (to our school.) I could still remember that when I spoke to her for the first time, she was rather brusque. As I got to know her, I realized I was mistaken (in) by my first impression of her. She explained that she was too shy to speak to strangers. In terms of her personality, she is actually very caring and sweet. She is a good istener, so I can easily talk (woth) to her and ask for an advice. Since we have many things in common, we share similar hobbies. We both like going to a cafe over a cup of tea. I`m deeply grateful to have met her, because we have such a good time together. Whenever I feel down, she is the only person who can cheer me up.

Thank you for sharing a story about your bestfriend Sunshine! ~ Hope you two have a great time. Bye!

Teacher Venice ~


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