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Is English important?

Long time ago, we don't have to speak other languages. However, as countries become closer, we need to speak international languages. In this aspect, it is widely acceted that Enlgish is an important language in the world. In this essay, I will give some reasons why I think English is significant language to us.

First of all, nowadays, we have no more any barrier between any coutries in the world except for some dangerous countries. There are diverse chances to meet someone from a different country. When we meet them in Korea or out of korea, we can have a conversation by speaking English as a global language. This will be the best advantage of knowing English.

Second of all, some countries use English as a standard of ability. As you know, Asian countries are usally serious for the amount of study for students. English will be the main subject what students must study. For example, In Korea, there are 5 subjects of an entering exam for a university; Korean, Math, Science, Society, and English. Although English is not a mother tongue for Koreans, they have to study it for entering universities, even for getting a job. I do not think this is good situation for society but can be the evidence why I insist Enlgish is an important language.

There are other global languages like Chinese or French. However, English is usually referred as the most useful language in the world. Therefore, nobody can insist that English is not as important as what we expect it.

Long time ago, we don't have to speak other languages. However, as countries become closer, we need to speak international languages. In this aspect, it is widely acceted that Enlgish is an important language in the world. In this essay, I will give some reasons why I think English is significant language to us.

First of all, nowadays, we have no more any barrier between any coutries in the world except for some dangerous countries. There are diverse chances to meet someone from a different country. When we meet them in Korea or out of korea, we can have a conversation by speaking English as a global language. This will be the best advantage of knowing English.

Second of all, some countries use English as a standard of ability. As you know, Asian countries are usally serious for the amount of study for students. English will be the main subject what students must study. For example, In Korea, there are 5 subjects of an entering exam for a university; Korean, Math, Science, Society, and English. Although English is not a mother tongue for Koreans, they have to study it for entering universities, even for getting a job. I do not think this is good situation for society but can be the evidence why I insist Enlgish is an important language.

There are other global languages like Chinese or French. However, English is usually referred as the most useful language in the world. Therefore, nobody can insist that English is not as important as what we expect it.


Correction:

Long time ago, we don't have to speak any other languages. However, as countries become closer, we need to speak the international language(s) to communicate. In this aspect, it is widely accepted that Enlgish is an important language in the world. In this essay, I will give some reasons why I think English is a significant language to us.

First of all, nowadays, (we have no more) there isn’t any barrier between (any) the coutries in the world except for some dangerous (countries) nations. There are diverse chances (to) of meeting someone from a different country. Like for an example, when we meet (them) foreigners in Korea or out of Korea, we can have a conversation to them by speaking English (as a global language). This will be the best advantage of knowing English.

Second (of all), some countries use English as a standard of ability. As you know, Asian countries are usally serious (for) about the amount of (study) knowledge (for) of their students. English will be the main subject what students must (study) learn. For example, in Korea, (there are 5 subjects of an entering exam for a university) five subjects are included in the entrance exam of the universities. These are Korean, Math, Science, Society, and English. Although English is not a mother tongue for Koreans, they have to study it (for) upon entering universities, and even for getting a job. I do not think this is a good (situation) thing for the society but it can be (the) an evidence why I insist English is (an important language) significant.

There are other global languages  in the world (like) such as Chinese or French. However, English is still (usually) referred as the most useful language in the world. Therefore, nobody can’t say (insist) that English is not as important as what we expect it.

Thank you for doing your homework Sunny. I do appreciate your effort. I'll discuss this one to you tomorrow. Anyways, you did a great job! ~

Teacher Venice ~


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