The first day i went to the dentist

I went to the dentist.

It was my first vist to a dentist.

I was worried.

Because i think it will hurt.

l lying down bed.

I scared machine sound.

Doctor say teeth is health.

I was relieved.

And i was happy when it was over.

I went to the dentist.

It was my first vist to the dentist.

I was worried.

Because I thought it would hurt.

l laid down on the bed.

I was scared of the machine sound.

The doctor said my teeth are healthy.

I was relieved.

And I was happy when it was over.

 

Hello, Lucy! 

          I think you are brave. Great job! There are some corrections I made on your writing and you can also write it this way;

          I went to the dentist for the first time. I was worried because I thought it would hurt. I laid down on the bed and I was scared when I heard the machine sound. The doctor said my teeth are heathy. I was relieved and happy when it was over.

         Keep up the good work!