Color

There are many kinds of color.
My favorite color is sky blue.
When I see sky blue, my mind was comfortable, and sky blue is clear and beautiful.
But I don't like blue, because blue is darker than sky blue.
What is your favorite color?

          There are many colors, but my favorite is sky blue. When I see that color, my mind is comfortable(relaxed). Sky blue is clear and beautiful, but I don't like blue, because it is darker than sky blue. What about you? What is your favorite color?

 

Hi, Min! 

       I agree that sky blue is a very beautiful color and you did a great job in expressin your thoughts in writing why you like that color. Though, there are some minimal lapses, your composition is clear and easy to understand. Keep up the good work!