Iwent to the dentist today
It was my first visit dentist.
I had a reguiar cheakup and school.
To be honist, I was nervous and scard because it was my first time.
When it was my turn,I cidsed my eye and went into the doctor's office.
The light went on as I lay on the bed.
Fortuntely, I appli a little bit of medicine befor I finished.
It was my first visit dentist.
I had a reguiar cheakup and school.
To be honist, I was nervous and scard because it was my first time.
When it was my turn,I cidsed my eye and went into the doctor's office.
The light went on as I lay on the bed.
Fortuntely, I appli a little bit of medicine befor I finished.
I went to the dentist today. It was my first visit to the dentist. I have a regular check up in school. To be honest, I was nervous and scare because it was my first time. When it was my turn, I closed my eyes and when inside the doctor's office. The light was on me as I lay on the bed. Fortunately, I applied a little bit of medicine before I finished.
Hello, Jayden!
Great job! You use the right verb tense in narrating your experience, however you have to be consistent in using past tense verbs in your story. You also have to check your spelling when you write. Kindly check other corrections I made on your writing! Keep up the good work!~
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