2.When I was eight years old, I couldn't swim well.
3.My dad taught me swimming.
4.I was scared at first.
5.But I practiced more.
6.And,I developed a lot.
7.Now, I can swim very well.
1.I went to a beach in Vietnam with my family.
2.When I was eight years old, I couldn't swim well.
3.My dad taught me how to swim.
4.I was scared at first.
5.But I practiced more.
6.And I developed a lot.
7.Now, I can swim very well.
Hello, Ruby!
You can also write your composition in paragraph form like this;
I went to a beach in Vietnam with my family. When I was eight years old, I couldn't swim well, so my dad taught me how to swim. I was scared at first, but I practiced more until I developed(improved) a lot. Now, I can swim very well.
Keep on practicing! You can do it!
Kath :)
