swimming

i went to the beach with my family i and sister want swimming

i felt it was good exercise and it was fun

i enjoyed to swim i kicked my feet i moved my arms

i swallowed some water

now i tired to practice swimming i am proud

soon i will swim very well

i went to the beach with my family i and sister want swimming

i felt it was good exercise and it was fun

i enjoyed to swim i kicked my feet i moved my arms

i swallowed some water

now i tired to practice swimming i am proud

soon i will swim very well

 

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I went to the beach with my family and my sister wanted to swim. I felt that it was a good exercise to my body and it was fun. I enjoyed swimming, I kicked my feet and I moved my arms but then I swallowed some water. Now, I tried to practice swimming and I am proud of myself.  Soon, I will swim very well.

 

Very good Charles! Keep it up and keep on practicing. ;)