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Introduce myself

< introduce >

I'm very interesting and excited that you are a interviewer and I'm a interviewee.
Anyway I will do my best for this interview.

My name is Jang Seokjoon. You and My friends called me Leo, too.
Our family is me, my wife and 3 daughters.

Currently I have working in Pantech for 15 years. But unfortunately the future of Pantech is not clear.
In Pantech, I have developed many mobile handsets.
In the first half of my working period, I took care of the fuction of Data Service of Handsets.
In the last half, I am taking care of IP Multimedia Service, for IMS.

As you know, I developed the first LTE Packet Video Telepony Handset of KOREA market using your BeeHD solution.
And I developed also the first VOLTE handset of KOREA market, too.

My stroing point is that I already know the all requirements of KOREA mobile carrier, KDDI, IR92,. and so on..
It is not nessary to waste time for learning this requirements.
And many friends are in the IMS industry, especially in the carrier. So I can ask directly what they want.
And I'm very familiar with your good IMS solution, BEEHD.

My weak point is that I didn't know what small compay use your solution.
And what is the problem?
But I can cover this problems and help it. Because I know very well your solution.

Thanks.

< introduce >

I'm very interesting and excited that you are a interviewer and I'm a interviewee.
Anyway I will do my best for this interview.

My name is Jang Seokjoon. You and My friends called me Leo, too.
Our family is me, my wife and 3 daughters.

Currently I have working in Pantech for 15 years. But unfortunately the future of Pantech is not clear.
In Pantech, I have developed many mobile handsets.
In the first half of my working period, I took care of the fuction of Data Service of Handsets.
In the last half, I am taking care of IP Multimedia Service, for IMS.

As you know, I developed the first LTE Packet Video Telepony Handset of KOREA market using your BeeHD solution.
And I developed also the first VOLTE handset of KOREA market, too.

My stroing point is that I already know the all requirements of KOREA mobile carrier, KDDI, IR92,. and so on..
It is not nessary to waste time for learning this requirements.
And many friends are in the IMS industry, especially in the carrier. So I can ask directly what they want.
And I'm very familiar with your good IMS solution, BEEHD.

My weak point is that I didn't know what small compay use your solution.
And what is the problem?
But I can cover this problems and help it. Because I know very well your solution.

Thanks.

CORRECTIONS:
Introduction
 
I'm very interested and excited that you are the interviewer and I'm the interviewee.
Anyway, I will do my best for this interview.
 
I'm Jang Seokjoon. My friends called me Leo.
There are 5 members in my family, my wife, my 3 daughters and I.
 
I am currently working in Pantech. I have been working there for 15 years. But, unfortunately the future of Pantech is not stable.
In Pantech, I have developed many mobile handsets.
In the first half of my working period, I took care about the function of the Data Service of a handset.
In the last half, I took care of the IP Multimedia Service or what we call IMS.
 
As you know, I had developed the first LTE Packet Video Telephone Handset for Korean market using the BeeHD solution.
And, I also developed the first VOLTE handset in the Korean market.
 
My strong point is that I already know all the things about making a handset, such as Carrier, KDDI, IR92 and so on.
I do not need to waste more time in learning these things.
And most of my friends are in the IMS Industry, especially in Carrier, so I can easily ask them directly about what they want.
Also, I am very familiar with your IMS Solution and BEEHD.
 
My weak point is that I didn't know what the smaller company uses for a solution.
And also, what is the problem?
But, I can cover this problem and solve it. Because, I know your solution very well.
 
Thanks.

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