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First homework!

Hello teacher! This is Alice.

It was nice time with you. And I'm happy to be your student. As you know, my dream is to be a pilot. So it's important to speak English exactly. Because, it's relate on safety of passengers. I need your help. Please teach me a lot. I really expect to your lessons. Thanks^^

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First homework. “Can you tell me about yourself?” 5th, Nov, 2020

This is my favorite saying from bible.

1 Corinthians 13:4-7
New International Version
4 Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. 5 It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. 6 Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. 7 It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres.

I'm a person who is really cold-hearted. I don't have a mercy mind when someone made mistakes and even though mine.
That kinds of cold-hearted are resembled with our furious society. But this COLD HEARTED can't change anything. But LOVE is winning all. So I want to be a person who can love. Like, Jesus who is the start of love.
I'm a person who is not good at everything. But I'm a person who always do huge effort on everything.
I'm a person who is not talented. But I'm a person who can make a talent.
I'm slow. But I'm walking every day. So I'm a person who is better than yesterday.
But it's not my own strength. It comes from god.
And I'm a person who know that. ^^

 

Hello teacher! this is Alice.

It was nice to meet you tonight and I'm happy to be your student. As I told you recently that my ultimate dream is to be a pilot so it's important to me to speak English very well. So that! I can rely for the safety measueres of my future passengers. I need your help. Please teach and guide me more in this communication skills as this is my passion for my dream. I really expect your guidance through this lessons. Thank you very much.

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First homework. “Can you tell me about yourself?” 5th, Nov, 2020

This is my favorite saying from bible.

1 Corinthians 13:4-7
New International Version
4 Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. 5 It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. 6 Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. 7 It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres.

I'm a cold-hearted person. I don't have compassion when someone made mistakes though even myself. Maybe it resembled with our furious society and this cold hearted person can't change anything. But as what Jesus is! that LOVE can conquers all. So I want to be a person who can feel love and be loved because I believed that Jesus is the essence of love. I'm a person who is not good at anything but I'm a person who always do huge effort on everything. I'm a person who is not talented but I'm a person who can make a talent to share. Yes! I'm slow, but I stand and walked everyday better than yesterday. And I know that it's not from my own strength where it comes from my faith to the Almighty God.


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