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Recently, my husband and I watch Netflix series so many times. After a pandemic, we hesitate to go outside cause most of the stores are closed and the virus. Before the virus, I usually go outside and meet my friends. Even I don't have an appointment, I go to shopping malls or a cafe. I was an outgoing person. However, after the situation has occurred, I felt so stressed and bored. I missed my routine days such as watching a movie in a theater or hugging with my friends. Watching the Netflix series is fine but I feel like I stuck in a box.

Recently, my husband and I watch Netflix series so many times.
>>Recently, my husband and I have been watching Netflix series a lot.

After a pandemic, we hesitate to go outside cause most of the stores are closed and the virus.
>>When the pandemic happened, we hesitated to go out because of the virus and most of the stores are closed.

Before the virus, I usually go outside and meet my friends.
>>Before the virus outbreak, I usually went out and meet my friends.

Even I don't have an appointment, I go to shopping malls or a cafe.
>>Even if I didn't have an appointment, I went to shopping malls or cafes.

I was an outgoing person.
>> No error.

However, after the situation has occurred, I felt so stressed and bored.
>>But now I feel so stressed and bored.

I missed my routine days such as watching a movie in a theater or hugging with my friends.
>>I miss my old routine such as going to the movies and being able to hug my friends.

Watching the Netflix series is fine but I feel like I stuck in a box.
>>Watching Netflix series is fine but I feel like I'm stuck in a box.

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