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Last week, I got a message from one of my high school friends. She's going to get married next month in November. I was glad to see this news but I felt unappreciated at the same time. I have two close high school friends. When I was getting married, they didn't bridal shower for me. I understood cause I was the first person who got married at that time. But this time, the other my friend did a bridal shower for another friend who I mentioned above. They uploaded this bridal shower pictures on Instagram and said you are my bestie thank you. To be honest, I felt bad because of this. I thought that a true friend is an old friend in the past time. Because they shared much time with me and know each other for a long time. However, I changed this view of my mind. I decided to concentrate on not just old friends but people who care about me and make an intimate relationship with me now.

Last week, I got a message from one of my high school friends.
>> No error.

She's going to get married next month in November.
>>She's going to get married next month/in November.

I was glad to see this news but I felt unappreciated at the same time.
>>I was glad to hear about the news but I felt unappreciated at the same time.

I have two close high school friends. 
>> No error.

When I was getting married, they didn't bridal shower for me.
>>When I was getting married, they didn't plan a bridal shower for me.

I understood cause I was the first person who got married at that time.
>>I understand 'cause I was the first to get married.

But this time, the other my friend did a bridal shower for another friend who I mentioned above.
>>But this time, one of them had a bridal shower for the other.

They uploaded this bridal shower pictures on Instagram and said you are my bestie thank you.
>>They uploaded the bridal shower pictures on Instagram with the caption "You are my bestie, thank you."

To be honest, I felt bad because of this. 
>> No error.

I thought that a true friend is an old friend in the past time. Because they shared much time with me and know each other for a long time. 
>>I thought a true friend is someone you've known for a long time since you have spent so much time together.

However, I changed this view of my mind. 
>>However, I've changed my perspective on this. 

I decided to concentrate on not just old friends but people who care about me and make an intimate relationship with me now.
>>I decided to concentrate on not just old friends, but people who care about me and try to make a deep relationship with me now.

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