영작교정
목록
완료

3rd homework :)

1. Whom do you admire the most?
- Of course I admire my parents the most, but if I have to choose somebody outside of my family, I would choose one woman who was my boss. She was always care all member of staffs, and led us to perfect way whatever the problems are.
- when she had a award from the company for the previous year’s outcome, she wanted to share the success and all the benefits of award even though I already quit the job. She never forgot her employees’ efforts.
- I learned what is real leadership also how to care my employees and a lot of problem-solving abilities from her. For this reason, I would like to be just like her when I become a leader.

2. Tell us about your family.
- My family consists of my father, mother, older brother and me. I lived in seoul with all of them. My father operates furniture factory, and my mother and brother help his business. Since I was a kid, making something like small bags, button was very familiar because I liked to imitate what they do. I think that’s why I liked to make something and wanted study art.


tnx Jennifer :)

1.    Whom do you admire the most? 
- Of course I admire my parents the most, but if I have to choose somebody outside of my family, I would choose one woman who was my boss. She cares all the members of staffs, and lead us to perfect way of solution to whatever problems are. 

When she had an award from the company for the previous year’s outcome, she wanted to share the success and all the benefits of the award to all of us, even though I already quit the job. She never forgot her employees’ efforts. 

I learned what is real leadership also how to care to employees and a lot of problem-solving abilities from her. For these reasons, I would like to be just like her when I become a leader.

2. Tell us about your family.
- My family consists of my father, mother, older brother and me. I lived in Seoul with all of them. My father operates furniture factory, and my mother and brother help his business. Since I was a kid, making something like small bags or buttons were very familiar to me because I liked to imitate what they do. I think that’s why I liked to make something and wanted to study art.


tnx Jennifer :)


수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 5회 30분 4주
번호
제목
작성자
튜터
작성일
4999
완료
[42번째 영작 첨삭] Martin Luther k. J.r
Rachel
-
2023.08.18
4998
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭] i Invited myfriends in myhouse
jieun
Berry
2023.08.18
4997
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭] video game
Oliver
-
2023.08.18
4996
완료
[64번째 영작 첨삭] My favorite animal
joshua
Berry
2023.08.18
4995
완료
[63번째 영작 첨삭] My brother is strange
aiden
Berry
2023.08.18
4994
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭] I went to the sea
bella
-
2023.08.17
4993
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭] Introduction
Eunice Kim
-
2023.08.17
4992
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭] i went to the youngdo, busan
jieun
Berry
2023.08.16
4991
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭] cricket
Oliver
-
2023.08.16
4990
완료
[62번째 영작 첨삭] Yesterday was hoilday
aiden
Berry
2023.08.16
4989
완료
[61번째 영작 첨삭] Yesterday was my birthday
joshua
Berry
2023.08.15
4988
완료
[60번째 영작 첨삭] My brother's birthday
joshua
Berry
2023.08.15
4987
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭] Can you call me again?
Suhyun
Linda
2023.08.15
4986
완료
[21번째 영작 첨삭] Diary
sopia
Pia
2023.08.14
4985
완료
[20번째 영작 첨삭] 김시온
sopia
Pia
2023.08.14
4984
완료
[19번째 영작 첨삭] 김온유
sopia
Pia
2023.08.14
4983
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭] the first class
Lilly
Melissa
2023.08.14
4982
완료
[13번째 영작 첨삭] Play with my family!
Emily
Johnna
2023.08.14
4981
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭] aunt's house
Oliver
-
2023.08.13
4980
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭] Company Introduction-2
Eunice Kim
-
2023.08.13

초대한 친구가 수업을 등록하면
무료 수업 1회를 드려요!

무료 수업 1회
초대한 친구가 회원 가입 및 수강권 결제 후 수업을 등록하면
두 사람 모두 무료 수업 1회 수강권을 받아요!
Step 01. 조이영어로 친구를 초대해 보세요!
https://joy05.co.kr
Step 02. 인증하기
초대한 친구가 수업 등록을 완료하면, 고객센터로 수업을 등록한 친구의 '아이디' 또는 '이름 + 휴대폰 번호 뒷자리'를 남겨주세요!
*자녀 혹은 학부모 이름으로 가입하신 경우, 실제 회원가입하신 수강생 이름으로 적어주세요!
Ex. 친구 아이디: joy5205 / 친구 이름: 김조이, 9876
Step 03. 혜택받기
고객센터를 통해 인증하신 내용이 확인되면, 혜택을 적용해드립니다!

Zoom 화상수업 가이드

1. Zoom 설치하기
아래 링크에 접속하여 Zoom 프로그램을 설치합니다.
2. 수강실 입장하기
1) 조이영어 홈페이지 로그인 후 강의실에서 [수강실 입장] 버튼을 클릭해주세요.
2) 버튼을 누르고 Zoom 프로그램 열기 허용 → 컴퓨터 오디오로 참가를 누르면 튜터와 연결됩니다.
3. Zoom 이용에 다른 문의사항이 있으신가요?
조이영어 학습매니저에게 연락주시면 수업에 관련된 문의사항을 친절히 상담해드리겠습니다.
  • 카카오톡 상담 채널 : @조이영어
  • 조이영어 고객센터 : 1899-8695 (운영시간 : 월~금 9:00~17:30)

이용약관

개인정보취급방침