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Lifestyles comprehension

1.I think a worldly passion is to do as one’s pleases.Like someone drinks as much as he wants, buys things he as much as he wants, finding pleasure sexually. Or someone enjoys sexual pleasure to his heart's content.

2.The happiest person is a someone who cherishes what he or she has now.

3. have many Christian and Catholic friends around me.
I'm not sure because I have no religion. I don't think religious people are particularly happy than others.
In my experience, the moment when I am satisfied with what I have without comparing myself to others, the moment when I accept myself objectively is the beginning of happiness.
And when I overcame the hardship with my will, I felt confidence and happiness growing little by little.
I don't think only people with religion are happy people.There are unhappy people in religion, and happy people among those who do not believe in religion.

1.I think a worldly passion is to do as one’s pleases.Like someone who drinks, and buys things as much as he wants, or someone who enjoys sexual pleasure to his heart's content.

2.The happiest person is someone who cherishes what he or she has now.

3.I'm not sure 'cause I have no religion, but I have many Christian and Catholic friends around me.
 I don't think religious people are particularly happy than others.
  In my experience, the moment I've became satisfied with what I have without comparing myself to others, and when I've accepted myself objectively is the beginning of my true happiness.
  And when I had overcame the hardships with my will, I felt that my confidence and happiness grew little by little.
  So I don't think only people with religion are the happy people.There are unhappy people in a religion, and happy people among those who do not believe in religion.


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