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first homework :)

Jennifer,
Thank you for being my teacher :)
I'm very lucky to meet you!
See you tomorrow!

Yuri
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1. Tell me about you.
-I’m lastly worked in Korean Artists Welfare Foundation and I was in charge of creating and supporting artist‘s new job. To explain this institution, the company just started or established last 2 years. They do make the circumstance of artist better. They support artist’s welfare such as health insurance, copyright infringement ect. Also, I worked ‘Seoul Art space’ as a staff for one year. Ever since I was a kid, I never really considered doing anything else without art. The reason why I applied for this is that I think it would be the very perfect opportunity to work here to make my dreams come true. “Making People love art before they gone!”

2. How did you get here today?
- Usually I prefer to take a bus than subway because I go to bus station on foot for 10 mins from my house. From bus station to here, I took 30mins. When I was a staff of ‘Seoul Art space, I took 2 hours from home to there, and I had to ride very complicated route, but I never late. So If I work here, I knew I don't think of being late because Seoul Foundation is much more close than there and I can take what I prefer to ride.

Jennifer,
Thank you for being my teacher :)
I'm very lucky to meet you!
See you tomorrow!

Yuri
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1. Tell me something about you. 
My previous job was in Korean Artists Welfare Foundation.  I was in charge of creating and supporting artist‘s new job. To explain this institution, the company just started or established last 2 years. They do make the situation of artists better. They support artist’s welfare such as health insurance, copyright infringement etc. Also, I worked in ‘Seoul Art space’ as a staff for one year. Ever since I was a kid, I never really considered doing anything else without art. The reason why I applied for this is that I think it would be the very perfect opportunity to work here to make my dreams come true. “Making People love art before they will be gone!”


2. How did you get here today?
- Usually I prefer to take a bus than subway because I go to bus station on foot for 10 mins from my house. From bus station to here, I took 30mins. When I was a staff of ‘Seoul Art space, I took 2 hours from home to there. I had to ride a very complicated route but I never had a late. So If I work here, I know I won’t be late because Seoul Foundation is much closer than there and I can take what I prefer to ride.

 

Yuri,

Your sentences are really great!!!! Think about it. I just did few corrections. I know that you are really good and smart. You just really need confidence and practice with communicating in English. I know you can do it! Ajah. ^^


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